*stands and claps*

Yes, yes, and YES. This is totally phenomsies (which is now officially a word). Flow good, pacing good, description excellent. The end confused me at first, but I like it crypic. I'm guessing the blue are his wife's and the green his daughter's?

I like the message. Depressing, but I like it. Do this again,

-REB

PS: faved!