Great lyrics! I could definitely feel a rhythm as I was reading the words. Fantastic job overall. Write on please! :)

Anna _

It's hard to judge a song without hearing the music, but I like the easy flow of the lyrics. I can see this as a popular Country Music tune belted out by someone like Dolly Parton.

I was about to write that it seems a bit mature for a "T" rating. But I guess today's teenagers are used to stronger stuff than this.