|Reviews for I Feel Like A Daffodil|
| pancake2 3/8/12 . chapter 1
This was really cute :3 I love the reference to iCarly with the daffodil thing XD
| Kohryu 3/6/12 . chapter 1
I started this review the moment i opened the link to this fic lol
first off, segment the paragraphs. its all squished together and makes it crazily difficult to read. Unlike with paper bount books to which we can control the lighting, with monitors we cant, even with adjusting the brightness, its still shooting light at our eyes directly. its really strenuous.
Otherwise it sounds and looks good, great FPV. hopefully an update with this turns into a mini series of updates? its way to short to end here. Kyle was giving her the "stare" must amount to something lol