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| Reviews for Apart |
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   Luna's Pen 7/1/12 . chapter 1This is a very interesting beginning! It'll be interesting to read the rest. |
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 4/4/12 . chapter 7 As always well done! You brought in some drama and suspense haha. Your plot is wonderful so far :) |
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 4/1/12 . chapter 6 short, but nice job as always! haha you left us with another cliffy... |
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/15/12 . chapter 5 nice job. I like Raz. he is very interesting. things are starting to get even better. Let me know when you next update:) |
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/12/12 . chapter 4 Love the quote on the top. Nice job. I like how you portray Catro's character. Your writing style is awesome. As always I'll be sure to read when you next update. :) |
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/10/12 . chapter 3 wow, that was amzingly written! nice job, your characters are awesome and i cant wait to read whats in store. the plot is great overall nice job! :) |
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/8/12 . chapter 1 wow this is really weel detailed. it is very well written, i can't wait to see where it goes from here. nice plot so far |
| Rachael M 3/6/12 . chapter 1 This is a well written piece, the prose flows well and minus a few spelling mistakes is an excellent narrative. It is relatively well paced, however the end did seem a little possibly however is because I see the potential for a much large, elaborate telling of the story. This is definitely a scary and vivid imagining of a possible future, your imagery and detail are good, and your sense of emotion/atmosphere is put across well. XXX |
