|Reviews for Apart|
| Luna's Pen 7/1/12 . chapter 1
This is a very interesting beginning! It'll be interesting to read the rest.
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 4/4/12 . chapter 7
As always well done! You brought in some drama and suspense haha. Your plot is wonderful so far :)
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 4/1/12 . chapter 6
short, but nice job as always! haha you left us with another cliffy...
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/15/12 . chapter 5
nice job. I like Raz. he is very interesting. things are starting to get even better. Let me know when you next update:)
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/12/12 . chapter 4
Love the quote on the top. Nice job. I like how you portray Catro's character. Your writing style is awesome. As always I'll be sure to read when you next update. :)
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/10/12 . chapter 3
wow, that was amzingly written! nice job, your characters are awesome and i cant wait to read whats in store. the plot is great
overall nice job! :)
| Attack-of-the-Blue-Penguins 3/8/12 . chapter 1
wow this is really weel detailed.
it is very well written, i can't wait to see where it goes from here. nice plot so far
| Rachael M 3/6/12 . chapter 1
This is a well written piece, the prose flows well and minus a few spelling mistakes is an excellent narrative.
It is relatively well paced, however the end did seem a little possibly however is because I see the potential for a much large, elaborate telling of the story.
This is definitely a scary and vivid imagining of a possible future, your imagery and detail are good, and your sense of emotion/atmosphere is put across well.