Even though you didn't say anything about the setting, the mood of the story you created really helped me picture the setting! Really cool!

How old is Skye? I thought he was younger...but now I'm not sure...

Awesome! I'm so curious to read more! It's quite the interesting topic, I must say! I never heard anything like it before.

I want to read more! :D

Wow that really caught my attention i really like your method of writing and would love to read more on this story. I like your choice of names and your use of description i almost could dee myself on the cliffs :) great job.