|Reviews for Forbidden for a Reason|
| Ophelia Schmit 9/16/12 . chapter 1
Okay, if you're going to be brutally honest, I'll be honest. After all, I shouldn't sugar coat anything since you probably want honesty.
This truly wasn't my favorite story to review. It wasn't good, but it wasn't bad, either. Trust me, I've read WAY worse. This story about a dad that gets angry at his fourteen-year-old daughter being pregnant. Yes, it's okay to get angry, but he LET her get pregnant. And once the siblings were mad, next thing they're SO nice. Yeah, your story was way better than that.
Watch me babble. Anyway, what also bothers me is that you used 'Tanya' as the car's first owner. Then you go on to explain the story behind her, and you used 'Tracy'. What is her name? You gave me two.
P.S. There's no need to return the favor. It's just a favor from a stranger, I don't need anything in return. I don't read stories for reviews, I don't even beg for them. If you go out of your way to return the favor, don't.
| 5abunnylover 4/28/12 . chapter 1
This is so sweet yet so sad. Poor car. I never thought I would say this but I am touched by a car. Keep up the amazing stuff!
| ASteamPoweredWriter 3/7/12 . chapter 1
Wow...that's so beautiful.
I've never thought about cars that way! You created such wonderful imagery!
| DarkHeartsStillBeat 3/6/12 . chapter 1
I love the way it is written through a cars eyes( if they have eyes). It is a very well writen piece of writing not many gramatical errors. You will be added to my favorite wriers and his piece of writing is now in one of my favorites. If you read this story recomend it and if you are reading this review and you haven't read it yet why not? read it. Its great.
| whitegrass23 3/6/12 . chapter 1
This is actually surprisingly sad... kudos for you for being able to make a story from a car's point of view kind of touching.