|Reviews for Decay is but a Term for Passing Time|
| StoryStan 3/12/12 . chapter 1
Wow! Great writing and good form! You're iambic pentameter is a bit spotty, so fixing that would make it even better! Overall, though, great! I was just being a bit picky.
| Eden Green 3/9/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful message woven within your words. Everything you wrote rings very true with me, and I think this is core belief shared by the majority of religions, the Abrahamic ones anyway.