How can you spell "knew" wrong. Lol jk jk. Just some suggestions, go back and fix the silly mistakes. Not trying to be mean or anything.

One of the best stories I read!:)

I love this story so much, I was so happy to find it! :3

Keep writing ppwwwweeeeeaaaasssseee ;3

You never know what to expect with this story I must say, each chapter is as surprising and well written as the last, if not more surprising and well written. This particular chapter ending was very surprising, I wasn't expecting that to happen with Khiry. Great job! :)

This was a really awesome chapter! It seems like Khiry is really protective over Vivvy but at the same time it seems like he has a second personality that takes over sometimes. And it shows these last few chapters. Great job on this one!

With how interesting and well written this story is, I say it deserves more reviews. So have some! My favorite chapter so far, especially with the suspense it had! Awesome!

I look forward to your next chapter. :)

Quite a chapter. Khiri doesn't seem to approve of Ren at all and maybe he can tell why. There may be a good reason but unknown at this time. Oh well, great chapter again!

I like the switching betwen POV's in this chapter, lets readers know what it is like in the Point of View of Khiry. Then at the end back to Vivvy. Creative names, and a great chapter. Well done!

I like this! The plot is very original and has very interesting character. The idea of a stuffed fox transorming into a human boy is very interesting and unique. I applaud you. Awesome first chapter.

I like the story so far but why do you keep having Vivvy say "N..." multiple times it doesn't make sense. Is she saying no every single time and not finishing the word?

This is really good. Very well written. Great job!