|Reviews for Anomaly War|
| Ynnej 5/21/13 . chapter 23
Nice entrance of Nadine. Quite like her shoes. She'd be a good mentee for Justine.
And oh my, Axel's accent is coming back ... just after his dark side resurfaced. Oh, mann.
May the strange key be the key to bringing Matt down! :D
| Lurtonx 5/17/13 . chapter 23
I have finally read anomaly and anomaly war after 4 days of spending all of my free time reading it. I have one word to say it about Brilliant absolutely brilliant. I love the story line unlike most stories it actually has a complex plot with twists that are predictable and has mysteries that aren't easily solved . I loved the cast of characters they all acted like normal people for the most and they each actually have a unique personality . I even like the villains unlike most stories or mangas I've read you make great antagonist ones that can even be slightly related to in way. Even the main antagonist Seth technically isn't completely evil his plan is messed up but technically he. Is only doing this since he believes its the only way to save the world. Out of all your characters though I absolutely love Ash probably because I can relate to him a lot since me and him really similar. Anyway enough of my ranting your story is amazing and I am hoping that you continue writing. I can't wait till the next update
| Ray Kamiya 5/17/13 . chapter 23
Damn man what a strong start to this new season _
| RayKamiya 5/16/13 . chapter 22
Nice breakdown, I can't wait to see what happens XD
| Levy 5/16/13 . chapter 22
Wow, this may be premature to say, but probably your best chapter yet. Like, whoaaaaaa. Everything was presented very clearly and made a lot of things made sense where it was confusing before. I feel like the characters have come a long way and this chapter shows how much they've developed as characters.
There was a lot of boldness in this chapter, but I think it was used effectively and it's significant. There was a lot of information to intake, but as I said, it clarifies a lot of things and makes me anticipate what's coming next. Still a lot of questions, but I'm sure those blanks will be filled very soon. I don't think we'll see a chapter quite like this ever again. No, siree.
| Ynnej 4/30/13 . chapter 21
Whoa. More pieces are falling into place:
- Why Valor is favoured by Gregory and Domino
- How Matt survived and how not many people knew about it
- Serph's hatred towards Anomalies
- How Ace and Nathan got into Eclipse
- The drifting apart between Valor and Sylvia
- Austin's lack of importance (though, I guess you just found a good chance to poke fun at him for the last time and used it. Great move ;)
- And now we're back to the very beginning! I'm stoked-and then you give us a sharp reminder that...s-...Sophie's gone. :(
| Smile Blooming 4/26/13 . chapter 21
Lol, Austin joke. Of course... "She didn't need her telepathy to tell how surprised he was." Yes, she doesn't need her psychic abilities! Well, now that we've come full circle, a lot of things make sense, but of course there's still some lingering questions.
The last scene where Seth greets Ace and Nathan was kinda cool and twisted. That poor Ace. It's odd that he was given powers while he was hospitalized. Seems like there wasn't even a point to do that besides being "in the area." So even though Seth has a very different way of thinking, he gets to stay and make Anomalies of his own? I'm still not sure how that works. Natural selection isn't so natural, but I guess that's what the Observers are for. Interesting to see the way they choose their candidates.
Well, this volume had been quite anticipated, though I felt it fell by the wayside towards the end. Not to say there wasn't anything enjoyable, but I am read to see the story continue from where the volume before this left off. It's quite a nice transition, really. We end with Leena's and Sophie's rebirth and power to resume the story with, well... their peril. Can't wait to see the other characters again!
| Cy 4/25/13 . chapter 21
Wow. This is a fantastic chapter. Good job, Ritz. And now that the "prequel" is complete, it's time to get back to the present and see what's going on with them. It sounds like we're going to have some crazy things going on very soon.
| Ray 4/25/13 . chapter 21
Damn man this is really getting good
| Dokidoki Delight 4/19/13 . chapter 20
Gregory's not an Anomaly, right? So how is it that he's able to telepathically communicate with everyone? Does he have some cerebral device like Charles Xavier? Now I'm picturing Gregory in a levitating chair. Speaking of, his conversation with Matt was probably the only other brief mentioning of Mrs. Booker. So she had a gambling problem, eh. Did she fall prey to the casino? Or perhaps her gambling was a farce and she was really in the meth business. Oh man.
Feels like we're really getting this story arc concluded now with the present characters appearing in the story. I'm pretty much ready to get this thing moving again and the amount of exposition given.
| Ynnej 4/18/13 . chapter 20
The Valors sure are good at protecting Gregory. I quite like the scene where Eric/Ulric and Jade get their powers. Very badass despite it being short due to their transformation repercussions.
Ah, Domino's thoughts on future Ace. Haha...
Looking forward to seeing chapters 21!
| Ray Kamiya 4/9/13 . chapter 20
DAMN YOU AND YOUR CLIFFHANGERS
anywho this is getting really good
sorry I wont be commenting much work has gotten quite busy lately X_X
| Cy 4/8/13 . chapter 20
Both Valors certainly live up to their names. They're both pretty badass. On the other hand, since there are two Magma and two Solid anomalies now then aren't Valor and Sylvia technically not as important as they were before since there are technically replacements for them? After all, if Domino could become the master of Flora, then Eric could become the master of Magma.
It looks like we're closing in to the end of the flashback arc. I've enjoy the flashback quite a bit, but I'm looking forward to seeing the modern characters in action again.
| Cy 4/4/13 . chapter 19
Sorry for taking so long to read this. It was a good chapter. Domino coming in and Demonica with Excalibur, Hayley constantly having her life threatened, and Eclipse showing up for the first time to cause some havoc, not to mention some more throwbacks to some of your fanfics from the days of yore.
I'm looking forward to seeing how things will be going down in the next chapter and I'm really looking forward to finding out more about Carol and what's going on with her.
| Dash Dynamic 3/7/13 . chapter 19
Excalibur lives up to its name, but Gregory made such a dangerous weapon out of it, being able to use all eight Affinities and all. Seems like the only one who can even use it is anyone with a Flora Affinity. These people need to handle their projects well. It took out Mia effectively, but seemed to have taken quite a toll on Domino. I wonder if this meant it wouldn't have worked the second time Mia lost control.
Hayley and Ray's encounter with a third kind was an interesting spectacle. So they've seen an Anomaly this early one, and it was this guy. That's pretty nutty. I see this shaped their lives a bit in Anomaly's first part.
I figured this would be the point where Ace fully loses his trust with his friends, but now he knows the truth, this clearly isn't the time and place for that, so I'm guessing it's when his friends ditch him to go to the God Realm, and he has no note of this. Something like that. Then he joins Eclipse in hopes that he'll one day exact his revenge and stuff. But that doesn't explain why his powers were suppressed. I'll hypothesize this more once Ace becomes an Anomaly, though, which should be an interesting event.
So there's a woman even Seth fears, eh? Could it be his granny? Everyone fears their grandma.