Oh shit! When I read your author's note at the bottom, I was like "Wait, isn't this Panda-Boo's thing?" and then I scrolled up and saw it was you! I read your BTR stories all the time on fanfiction! Damn, what are the chances I just happen to find this insanely hot and great story just randomly on fictionpress, and it's yours?

Well, now I'm off to stalk your fictionpress page lol:D

Great, hot, perfect story, like always:DDDDD

In all honesty...I feel it went too fast. At first, Adam's "nervous"...and then he shows this kinky side after losing his virginity (in the same night, in fact!). The story has the potential of expanding - in order to develop Adam's character. Since it's a one-shot, I say it shoud have been one or the other - Nervous Adam or Kinky Adam. Jason had the same personality throughout, so there's not much to say about him. The pairing was typical in a gay story - I am guilty of the emo-looking gay kid as well, actually - but the sex scene(s) were suprisingly good and detailed. (Although, keep in mind there are more words than "cock" when referring to a man's penis.) I admire the grammar work; and always remember that the semicolon is your best friend.

omg i would love to read a sequel to this its soooooooo good

So glad I found this! Totally worth the read. Quick tip though, I don't think Adam should have been able to walk after his first time of buttsex. Very good though, loved it! :D

Owwwww damn girl, that was honestly the longest one-shot I ever read lol but omg so worth it :D I loved it! And its a good thing you sent me a pic of what jason and adam look like so I can picture the whole thing so beautifully :') Wonderful job! You always do amazing :D

That was really good:) I was smiling through the whole thing:)