OH MY GOSH I LOVE THIS STORY! PLEASE TELL ME YOU'RE WORKING CHAPTER SIX!

I love this story so far. I love zombies so this is like perfect to me!

see? R&R-ing XD

good chap, i like beecky, although she's a bit too panicky -.-

"They didn't kill him, but you might of." I say - might've*

you're rushing a bit too much, so slow down XD with the story i mean. also details like, where do they sleep? how do they survive? how are the relationships between the 3? stuff like that ;)

but its good, and i like it ;)

...okay i love this shit XD this is badass XD im all for badass hahahahah

You write dark and scary shit dude XD but its good shit ;)

it's so good that i barely find anything wrong with it XD

MORE!

Even better than last chapter. I LOVE this concept, it's sooo disturbing. Show more of the conflict that they're killing children, though, so this doesn't just turn into a zombie-fic. Y'know, when the characters just roam the country and mindlessly kill everything in sight. Then the concept would loose the impact.

Definitely excited to see where this goes.

-REB

Fabulous description. The fourth paragraph gave major chills, and that doesn't happen often. You captured the chaos of panic nicely. Well done.

-REB

Now that is what I call a powerful first chapter. I need to read more. WHY ARE THEY DEAD? Augh, I need to steal your talent for a day so I can start on my still unfinished novels.