|Reviews for dead weight|
| classic violet 4/24/12 . chapter 1
I've never read a poem about wrestling before, it's really good I love the diction
| Inkspilled 4/2/12 . chapter 1
This caught my attention for the line breaks between the first and second stanza. I thought it was very effective. The line "placing trophies on my neck" is very interestingly worded, I like that. Nice work. :)
| becquerel 3/13/12 . chapter 1
omg this is fabulous. really, the middle stanza (thos two lines) and last line are stunning. this review sucks, but keep up the good work, because this is truly wonderful.