| Reviews for dead weight |
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classic violet 4/24/12 . chapter 1I've never read a poem about wrestling before, it's really good I love the diction |
Inkspilled 4/2/12 . chapter 1This caught my attention for the line breaks between the first and second stanza. I thought it was very effective. The line "placing trophies on my neck" is very interestingly worded, I like that. Nice work. :) |
becquerel 3/13/12 . chapter 1omg this is fabulous. really, the middle stanza (thos two lines) and last line are stunning. this review sucks, but keep up the good work, because this is truly wonderful. |