I loved this poem with a passion. I feel myself relating as I read further, and this is so true and real to the soul. One mistake though, yet everything went together lovely.

Great poem, its really well written and you've got a brilliant flow going on. Loved it, you're a great author :-D

good poem XD...who died? I was kinda confused there. I liked it but you spelt a word wrong...its told not tolled :P. love your poem up the great work