I can actually see this being on the Leaving Cert English poetry course, you really should become a poet, I became so enthralled in that poem I felt everything you described, you have a gift, and an amazing one. Keep up this superb and talented work .

Another great poem, I love your style this again has great flow and the words create a beautiful image.

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Wow. It's amazing! I told you time and time again how talented you are :3