|Reviews for The Clocks Were Mocking Her|
| I AM Surreal Wander 3/14/12 . chapter 1
Wow, I really appreciate the flow of these lyrics. That was awesome. Short and sweet, no doubt impactful. It's good to find something unique or out there as opposed to the run-of-the-mill generic stuff that I can't begin to remember to forget hehe. It's just "vague" enough and tells enough to leave one's imagination running. Keep it up. If you don't mind me saying this, do you mind checking out my poem "Where Does One Look"? And some feedback as well for my spiritual epic novel "Surreal Wander", which is currently in the first chapter (may take a while though heheh..). I would appreciate any constructive feedback. Peace be with you.
| Song of the Raven 3/14/12 . chapter 1
That is a brilliant poem! I especially love the format and where the rhymes are put in, it gives it a nice rhythm. Short and sweet and to the point.