|Reviews for The Elements|
| Monty Mason 3/23/12 . chapter 1
A very nice little piece. I really liked how you used human concept of a family to relate to the four primal elements of nature. Also how you seemed to go in depth into each element describing it with good imagery and usage of words, and at the same time being able to link it to a human family (like water is mother, earth is father, fire is the teenager and air is the toddler). A nice little read to pass the time ), keep up the nice work. Out of curiosity though, where did you loose that one mark?