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| Reviews for Nothing But Net |
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  D 3/22/13 . chapter 1 Awwww It was so cute! |
| Guest 1/8/13 . chapter 1 Omg, loved, loved, loved it! |
 JudasTree 1/1/13 . chapter 2Yes to a sequel! |
| UneGirl17 9/25/12 . chapter 1 Nothing but fluffyness. |
| ForeverinDelirium 9/24/12 . chapter 2 Intriguing! So... Yes for sequel! |
| xEchoxInfernox 9/17/12 . chapter 1 hehehe, cute:D |
| amillionsmiles 9/3/12 . chapter 1 D'AWWW. *squees from the adorableness* This is awesome. I love their interactions (and I love basketball, too), so, all in all, it was perfect. :D |
| purplebutterfly2 6/11/12 . chapter 1 so cut luved it :D |
| Angel District 4/27/12 . chapter 1 CUTE! Haha... Loved it :D |
| asheepiage 4/22/12 . chapter 1 This is so insanely cute! I loved it! Keep writing! asheepiage. |
| SwimmingThroughExistance 4/13/12 . chapter 1 relly cute, especially how you executed the ordinariness in the last sentence. good job, |
| wasabi-angel 4/12/12 . chapter 1 ADORABLE 3 loved it! :D when some writers portray their characters as somewhat clueless, I get annoyed because it just doesn't seem realistic or genuine, but that is sooo not the case for you! keep up the great writing! |
| The Siege 4/11/12 . chapter 1 AWW. SO CUUUTE. LOVE IT! However, if you ever have the time to revise and edit, I think you should because your verb tense keeps switching from past to present. Be consistent! Also, a lot of the words you used in the dialogue were simply too sophisticated. No teenager, heck, no adults, even use the words "cantankerous" or "adherents" or even "boorish" in casual conversation. The words are really good and descriptive, but way too formal for teen conversation. All in all, pretty well-written! :) |
| checkyesdana 4/10/12 . chapter 1 this was so adorable! Very cute, good work! |
| Inkpress00 4/10/12 . chapter 1 Loved it and the concept! If I may, I have a couple suggestions... Of course, since it is this kind of story, it is obvious that Sarah and Even are going to get together (and it's adorable). But it's a bit *too* obvious. Try to maybe cut back on the friends who know what's up. Kinda makes the main character look dumb, and that's clearly not what you were going for. Secondly, the whole description of the varsity jackets brings the whole story to a screeching halt. Try to maybe cut a bit out, edit it down so that just the necessities are in there. Finally, Sarah took the whole thing pretty easily for being thoroughly convinced that Evan hated/just wanted to torture her. Maybe some flashback scenes to show their relationship a bit more. And now for the good part! Ridiculously cute. I squee so much at the whole hate-to-love thing. Evan sounds hot and I wish I had one. Samantha sounds awesome. I wish I had one. Actually, I wish I had all of them. And a jacket. I know I don't know you at all and you have no motivation to listen to me, but I just wanted you to know what I thought. Thanks for reading my insanely boring rambling! Inky |
