|Reviews for Odin|
| That one person 2/19/13 . chapter 1
Shit. *sniffle* I'm supposed to be the drama llama and you go and do this beautiful shit. *sniffle*
| JHeartbreak 3/18/12 . chapter 1
This story is much more plot-oriented than previous ones, but you hardly lose sight of your characterization or setting.
The whole story takes place in Coward's (Leon's?) mind, which works I think. It follows his own impressionistic stream of memories, in a Proustian way.
I think you've managed to powerfully evoke feelings in a very brief story.
| Honunjama 3/18/12 . chapter 1
This was kind of strange and wistful...I'm not sure I ever really knew what was happening though...
| chewychester 3/16/12 . chapter 1
I think this story made me hold my breath. At the end I felt dizzy. Or could it have been the feeling of getting close to the center of another plane of consciousness. I liked it, thanks for posting.