Hahaha...Fluffy Candy great line. It's a great chapter Lee! Really good work.

Yieeee! Soo. Cheeeesy! A point for their love team :)

This had to happen eventually. Felix was too good a guy for Lily to ever hurt on purpose... and therefore she probably never would have admitted, even to herself, that her feelings for Zane were much deeper.

Will things progress now? Can they? After all, she is still a student and he is still her teacher.

What a great chapter tense in all the right places and fun in other places!

Love it. As usual, just didnt feel like logging in XD im lazy. Amazing chapter.
I havent updated my story on fanfiction because of school work and surgery :/
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This is a fascinating story... though the part about Felix is a little confusing. Where, exactly, did he come from in the first place? What is his past with Lily?

Lily was very pleased that Zane went to such lengths to save her and then even injured himself trying to get to her in the hospital. But when he visited her she deliberately put the barrier of Felix between them... right? (I don't even know, and I just read this story straight through.

Johanna clearly sees that Lily and Zane care for each other... but where does Felix fall into the picture?

I misinterpreted the part where Lily tried to explain. I thought that Zane stopped her for her own sake. I didn't realize that it was because of jealousy. That is stupid when it is clear that whatever happened was horrible for Lily. The boy needs to grow up a little bit and stop acting like an idiot.

It seems as if his mother is throwing the pair together. Perhaps, because she is a senior, she assumes that everything will be okay at the end of the year. Still, that seems risky. There is not doubt that mutual attraction exists, however.

YAY! Finally! Am I really that mean when I correct people? Gods, I am a bitch sometimes. Ah, well. On with the chappie. Zane is surprisingly calm for someone who has just had his girl stolen from him. Man, you gots to fight for your woman! And Zane's family was adorable, I actually like Jaden. He's pretty darn level-headed and rational. Might as well become a Judge, or a Mediator. Or a psychiatrist. That's always an option. That moment with David infuriated me beyond belief, you have no idea. I was that close to punching my iPad. Felix is sweet, and all, but it's not meant to be! I want to like him, but I can't. He's a great guy, but he's not for Lily. And I loved my totally random slapping of Zane, FYI.
Hugs,
A

Nice chapter! I like that her dad got ganged up on he seems like a jerk Felix has an interesting personality. As for Zane I hope he's okay.

omg thanks for updating

YO YO YO! I told ya I'd come read it! And truthfully it's freaking amazing! I love it in all honesty! Great story! Keep writing!
- Skylark#1

Oh my...*squeal* First of all, AWWWWW. Poor Lily and Zane! I erupted in laughter at Chazz's logic, which is irrevocably akin to my own. So, Jaden, huh? He's into art and history? Please say he can translate Latin, because I will then love him forever. Gods, I'm such a nerd about this. I was doing chem, and suddenly the word aliquot comes up, which is derived from the Latin aliquid. I started jumping up and down in joy, no joke. Again, sis, how the heck do you paint me as someone so awesome? I love myself in this depiction. Although, my mind is indeed that mercurial. I can't hold a grudge to save my life. Not to mention, I look evil? Really? People at the dojo have only called me focused and fierce, not evil. Jaden was actually really sweet, though. I loved this chapter like crazy, so please update soon. Whatever happened to BG, too?
Hugs,
A
Ps. Leek and Keith were boss in this. Just FYI.

Finally, it's been a long time. It's okay. I couldn't wait to see what happen next chapter. :)

Hello! They're safe! Thank goodness for that though I have to wonder why that girl slapped Zane it seemed unnecessary. Zane had hypothermia at least someone caught it even though a doctor should have figured it out. Glad their alright though. Great chapter Lee!

Hugs,
M