Yayayayayayay! You updated! Finally, I mean, it's been a while. In any case, I super-duper loved this chapter. It's not all medicine-y yet, but there was a lot of really brilliant character development. Johanna was...great. Again, you are one of few people who can actually capture me in writing. Not even I can really do that. They all come out slightly different. But you got it down, right down to the mama-bear nature of it all. I can't wait until she shows up in person. Knowing you, it will be fecking amazing. Zane...*cue swoon*. I love the guy, you are a lucky child. But, I trust you, even if it may be to my detriment. It won't be, you gave me Laud, after all. Terry...I'm still conflicted about her. I'm sorry, she seems to care a lot, but I wouldn't be able to forgive her until she took a stand. The funeral sounds downright weird, but heartbreaking too. I never know how to act at funerals. I cry, sure, but I just slip into shock, I guess. I can't wait for the next chappie, so please don't make me wait!
Hugs,
A

Hurray! Their going to be saved! I'm glad I hope Lily does not die... don't kill Lily!, but I loved the chapter.

This is amazing! Even better than what I could have hoped for.

Obviously very well written, as always and extremely interesting! I love every bit of the story! Keep it up! :D

The story is great and I love Lily 3 :D

TheFremioneGirl from

Really good chapter, update soon plz!

Hey! Great chapter! Poor Lily I hope she'll be okay. Now as for Terry come on you won't hurt Lily you simply don't have it in you. Zane you...are a great friend, but a bad doctor. Lily...why do you have to be so stubborn? Ugh.

Anyway terrific chapter Lee.

Hugs,

M

Alright, alright, here it is. First of all, I apologise in the time it took for me to read this chapter. My computer has gone insane and has decided that it will present everything in ginormous letters. It's infuriating. From the top, I swear I could see everything that was going down in the ditch. As clear as day. The stone, although it does not sound appetising to me, looks beautiful. I once went to a salt mine when I lived in Austria, actually, and I licked the walls. They were salty, no surprise. Zane is adorable when he's worried, and his humour, while it fails, always amuses me. Clearly, I was fuming when Terry came about, but I reserve my anger for later. That molester should be stabbed in the jugular with a freshly sliced orange peel! I cant believe it, sis, really. I am so sorry. Poor lily! And is Zane really looking into being an astrologist? Really? He seems to be pretty good at the whole emergency planner thing, though. He should look into it. I am going to skip over my tirade against wrestling, because that would probably be a tad hypocritical coming from a person who delights in medieval torture and takes a class studying a culture/ language where killing for sport was common, and they had 5 words for prostitute. That's right, 5. And Chazz knows medicine? I love him even more know. But I don't know Jaden yet, so I'll wait impatiently. And Zane's hormones weren't as active as a normal male's, so it was mild. We both know what would have happened had he awoken net to a girl in a normal scenario. Cue rimshot, please. And Terry is wrong, Zane is perfect. Because Lily is already so mature, she needs someone older than her to comprehend what's going through her head, and not be threatened by her brilliance. Only someone older and more mature can understand that. Yes, you can have Anna say that, considering I just said it. And someone just as odd as she is. So yes, this is my exceedingly long review. The chat was great sis, and I can't wait for the hospital. It's my gory self speaking, here.

Loves ya lots!

A

Alright, alright, here it is. First of all, I apologise in the time it took for me to read this chapter. My computer has gone insane and has decided that it will present everything in ginormous letters. It's infuriating. From the top, I swear I could see everything that was going down in the ditch. As clear as day. The stone, although it does not sound appetising to me, looks beautiful. I once went to a salt mine when I lived in Austria, actually, and I licked the walls. They were salty, no surprise. Zane is adorable when he's worried, and his humour, while it fails, always amuses me. Clearly, I was fuming when Terry came about, but I reserve my anger for later. That molester should be stabbed in the jugular with a freshly sliced orange peel! I cant believe it, sis, really. I am so sorry. And is Zane really looking into being an astrologist? Really? He seems to be pretty good at the whole emergency planner thing, though. He should look into it. I am going to skip over my tirade against wrestling, because that would probably be a tad hypocritical coming from a person who delights in medieval torture and takes a class studying a culture/ language where killing for sport was common, and they had 5 words for prostitute. That's right, 5. And Chazz knows medicine? I love him even more know. But I don't know Jaden yet, so I'll wait impatiently. And Zane's hormones weren't as active as a normal male's, so it was mild. We both know what would have happened had he awoken net to a girl in a normal scenario. Cue rimshot, please. And Terry is wrong, Zane is perfect. Because Lily is already so mature, she needs someone older than her to comprehend what's going through her head, and not be threatened by her brilliance. Only someone older and more mature can understand that. Yes, you can have Anna say that, considering I just said it. And someone just as odd as she is. So yes, this is my exceedingly long review. The chat was great sis, and I can't wait for the hospital. It's my gory self speaking, here.

Loves ya lots!

A

hey jammer dat eke so lank gevat ht, 1ste keer wat eke weer "online" gekom ht, en laik hello gan j nu soos rerig ha soos amper dood mak of iets? you are sooo mean hehehe wonder ma nt wantu wil j gan mt al ha beseerings alwe?

anyway update eks seker die ander mense is al moeg vir wag vir jou om die volgende chappter op te sit so laaik doend dit net-_6 hehe sien jou donderdag.

o en as j wonder hkm ek so baie nou kan skryf... ek ht soos nu nt dai hele chapter klaar gemaak so die "woorde" wili ophou om te kom nie. dis soos seker die langste review wat ek soos ooit geskryf ht weet jy dit? anyway lov's di stry soos altyd so update.

lovies ya

koekie101

I get to still be Romanian! Yay! You are the best person ever, officially. I'll even set up a billboard, just like Zane suggested. First, you need to tell me your middle name, though. Supreme Empress. And thank goodness I don't have red hair, that look does not suit me. Aves suggests blue hair, which is odd. Keith is still really sweet, and Leek is growing on me. Oddly enough. I want to slap Ter, even if she is my sister, for what she said to you. Yes, I can't understand that she loves the bastard, but she should care a bit more, not just suggest counselling. Let's say I understand her motives, and her feelings, but disagree with her methods. Who is Sean? I am so confused. I thought the other one was Jaden. Because it would be awkward if the other's name were Sean, especially if Anna's involved. Although I hope it was a typo, because he sounds like a Physics nerd. Although Chazz, he's just cool. I mean, seriously cool. I'm torn, as per usual. That bit at the end shook me up, I was yelling at the screen and everything. And you're really good at this economic thing. That crap makes no sense to me whatsoever. You can have Anna say that, btw. And can I keep my languages? All 5 of em, please? This was a great chappie, really. I hope I won't see a ton of delay on the next one, because you got me on the edge of my seat! Love you sisi!

Hugs,

A

This chapter was fun. Lily ah she just continues to generally rule. Zane, dude you've been unknowingly whipped. Still liking Chazz I hope he gets to be happy in the end. And finally Nooooo Lily got hurt! She better be okay later. Keep it up Lee!

Hugs,

Marcus

Uh oh... O.O

Hehehe, rerig? Thaba tapits! Jou woorde nie myne nie haha dis 'j' ne?

Over use of words! Hehehe jou woorde ook nie myne nie

Lovies

Koekie101

Haha, loved the use of 'Merlin' and Keith's reasoning for it.

Liking the tension between Lily and Zane : )

Interesting observations by Zane on Lily's relationship with her sister. Also sweet of him to worry about her health.

Looking forward to your next chapter : )

I liked this chapter. Lily's attitude continues to just generally rule. Leek...I'm still not 100 percent sure on him though I'm glad that he was taught a lesson. Anyway skipping to the point great chapter Lee!

I had been so excited...and you didn't disappoint. You never do. Let's begin with Terry. I know I'm her sister...but I don't like her. It's awful, I know. But my favourite sensei's name is Terri, so I can live. Chazz is becoming a very..interesting character. Then again, I don't know him all that well, so I shall interrogate you about him later. Oddly enough, he isn't really my type. My usual type, that is. Zane...is awesome. No wonder you've fallen for him, honey, really. One day, the name of Zane Davitz will cause much swooning across the world. On to the subject of Leek. Yup, I caught onto his true identity. You didn't think I'd ignore the blatant similarities, right? He really is a douche, though. I so want to punch him. And his parents too. Who would name their child after an vile, onion plant? Really? I could live with Kale...but LEEK? We will discuss your naming later. And Keith is adorable...I know who he is too. Give that guy a hug for me, won't you? And what are Zane's eyes like? You didn't mention that. And now I'm hungry. It's your fault for bringing up a mouthwatering barbeque. And Zane is adorable...Loved the chapter, quite obviously, and I will be demanding another one soon, as I know you have several hidden away.

Hugs and Love,

A