Great chapter Lee. Lily had weapon Zane's right to be afraid I would be. The amusement park had no roller coaster...eh, there over rated anyway. Favorite line in this chapter: "No, I'm too excited. Can you see Sirius?"

"No, this is not Harry Potter." I answered. She frowned.

"No, I meant Sirius the dog star"

That cracked me up great job Lee keep it up

Hahaha chicken bits! Funny! Burning the pasta hahaha funnier!

I loved it! Especially when she said they were friends, and just her whole character!

The idea of putting Chazz in with a wedding was formidable, and I wonder who he's going to take... Maybe Lily? ;)

Also, the bit with the "innocence" of Lily is very intriguing.

Can't wait for more! :)

Youre allergic to cinnamon? That's awful! But what is Lily's secret? Getting back to the chapter...Zane is awesome! He's like a little kid, just as innocent as his students. Although, Lily isn't the most innocent name I can think of. Innocent, nevertheless. That last bit with the perverted interpretation was brilliant. And I loved that scene in the pizzeria. I request a scene of spitfire between Lee and Zane. Vern agrees with me, btw. The poem is really good, as well.

Alright, first great chapter as usual you do excellent work. Second I liked the chemistry between Lily and Zane it was all very fun to read. Zane's mom has some issues doesn't she? She needs to get a pet or something to get rid of that empty nest syndrome,

Anyway great job Skye! :)

Hey I like this story but I wish it was more detailed instead of on the surface only. :) Just giving my honest opinion anyway. I would like to see from Lily POV though. I am curious about her now. :) xoxo.

Wow! This is extraordinary! I love the way it's written and I can really feel every emotion Mr Davitz feels!

I like Lily Maze, she sounds like a great character, very straight to the point and very sure of herself. She always knows what to say, even in embarrassing or tricky situation.

I love it. Let me know when you upload the next chapter! :)

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BITE ME!

Hehehe

Where am I? :( wana read more

Update

C u 2moro

You threw a desk at a student...this teaches me not to mess with you. But I'm sure you're not all that angry anymore, right? And I could read that bit of Afrikaans at the beginning! I am soooo proud of myself! Zane is getting a bit touchy with Lilz, isn't he? Or lee, pardon. Lilz just sounds cool. And here we go again with the popcorn..you really are insatiable. I keep wondering who Keith is based on...but I'm pretty sure I know. Your laugh is clearly nothing like mine...line is Loud and exuberant. Hyena-esque, as Aves playfully describes it. She's joking, I don't sound like a hyena. And I loved her angry/indignant outburst. In any case, I cannot wait for the next chapter. Not to mention I finally figured out who koekie101 is..took me a while, eh?

Hugs,

A

Great chapter Skye. I'm really enjoying the nice chemistry that Zane and Lily have going it makes me laugh. Lily is awesome messing with Keith watch like that. Lily is probably my favorite character. She's fun. Anyways great chapter Skye.

Great chapter Skye. I really enjoyed how she freaked him out just to wake him up. Poor Zane he's like me once you wake up you are up for the day no matter the time. Still I enjoyed the exchange between them it was fun to read.

yes me again, just other name.

just wanted too say:

i like cheese and i am not a lunatic. popcorn girl!

sinerely your friend

finkle.

HA! so it was me, you dirty little... cheese. Wanna read more about me _ hehe

HEY! Is said "black-haired girl talking animatedly, using obscene hand gestures" suposed too be ME because I'll let u know that I am not a 'lunatic'

sincerely

rijha(also don'tknow how too spell that)

and not a lunatic, weird yes.

Bite me!