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   NizumiBreathes 3/20/12 . chapter 1Wow. Well written! You can really feel the emotions. Great job. ) |
| V 3/19/12 . chapter 1 :O This is incredible Halstead. Very good dialouge. I get a good sense of the characters and Gabriel's sort of torn feeling. And I love the ending sentences, very succinct and resonating. Great job. :) |
| the ticking clock 3/18/12 . chapter 1 beautiful. the emotions, the descriptions, the tension, the ending, the title...everything about this story is AMAZING. :) brilliant job mellon! |
