|Reviews for Last Chance, My Brother|
| NizumiBreathes 3/20/12 . chapter 1
Wow. Well written!
You can really feel the emotions.
Great job. )
| V 3/19/12 . chapter 1
:O This is incredible Halstead. Very good dialouge. I get a good sense of the characters and Gabriel's sort of torn feeling. And I love the ending sentences, very succinct and resonating. Great job. :)
| the ticking clock 3/18/12 . chapter 1
beautiful. the emotions, the descriptions, the tension, the ending, the title...everything about this story is AMAZING. :) brilliant job mellon!