Aw, this is sad. Yet so beautifully written and expressed. Amazing job, keep it up :D

It's beautifully tragic. The style and vocabulary was really rich! Good job! And stay strong! :)

I'm sorry for your loss. I hope you're alright, though I know you won't be. I loved the poem, despite it being depressing. I think you have potential. I you ever need to talk, I'd gladly listen to you, and so the offer is open. :) I've lost many people in my life, including my father recently, which I cannot heal from. I can relate. Please think about my offer if ever you need it. X

Awww, that was touching. Beautiful work.

I am sorry for your loss.