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| Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love |
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  average-psycho 4/26/12 . chapter 14 so simple and yet so true. |
| reluctant writer 4/26/12 . chapter 14 It's amazing what kinds of things you can fit in haikus. I can definitely realte. |
| PocoSnow15 4/26/12 . chapter 14 Beautiful! The same thing just happened to me! |
| un-pre-dic-ta-ble 57 4/26/12 . chapter 14 This sorta reminds me of my love and how I want to thank him. I love this so much! Great job! |
| lackluster 4/26/12 . chapter 14 a simple thank you has so much meaning. |
| Random-Idiocity 4/26/12 . chapter 14 This was very good...Keep it Up! |
| myno 4/26/12 . chapter 14 lovely. |
| myno 4/26/12 . chapter 13 all photographs lack one color: life. Who could have said it better, and in only eleven words? |
| bone xylophone 4/26/12 . chapter 13 This is very good. It's not easy to put a lot of emotion into a short poem, especailly one that needs to follow a very specific format, but you've done it. It is a very beautiful, sweet, sad poem, and an excellent haiku. |
| dusk orchid 4/26/12 . chapter 13 Simply said: it's beautiful. Very powerful and vivid. This one is my favorite out of the two. |
| BlackDie53 4/26/12 . chapter 13 Another beautiful haiku. Keep it up! |
| la presa de la noche 4/26/12 . chapter 13 Holy shit that's good. Wow. I mean wow. I love it. Now I'm all inspired to write poetry instead of doing my Gov't homework... Just wow. Can't find the words to explain what I love about it. It's simple (like all haiku are) and deep (like all haiku are meant to be) You have a gift for this stuff. I suck at haiku. Keep it up. |
| Alankria 4/26/12 . chapter 13 A beautiful pair of poems. |
| nanashi-04 4/26/12 . chapter 13 Hauntingly Beautiful |
| citrus scented 4/26/12 . chapter 13 all photographs lack one colour: life...thats just...gold dust, the line is memorable. |
