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| Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love |
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  reluctant writer 4/26/12 . chapter 13 Oh, I really liked these. I can really feel something from reading them. |
| un-pre-dic-ta-ble 57 4/26/12 . chapter 12 I love this tanka it is so good so sad to. I loved it I want to cry now. |
| dusk orchid 4/26/12 . chapter 12 Hauntingly tragic. I love the part about the "radiant smile will be stolen." |
| myno 4/26/12 . chapter 12 this is lovely too, but i actually liked the haiku better. |
| BlackDie53 4/26/12 . chapter 12 This is just beautiful. |
| nanashi-04 4/26/12 . chapter 12 so sad that this always happens. excellent tanka. |
| dollface and her cancer 4/26/12 . chapter 12 You've mastered the art of haiku. I'm jealous. |
| citrus scented 4/26/12 . chapter 12 oh i can relate, you capture such sorrow. |
| reluctant writer 4/26/12 . chapter 12 Sad, but beautiful. |
| Jacqueline Stem 4/26/12 . chapter 12 Love it. Sorry, but I don't think theres much else to say but that. |
| Katterree Fengari 4/26/12 . chapter 12 Oo, very interesting...well, that answers my question of what does the title mean I like "the last trace" part |
| Ironic Presence 4/26/12 . chapter 12 wow. again, I feel exactly the same way about someone right now. good job. |
| KitsuneXHana 4/26/12 . chapter 11 A sad one. Makes one think that you're just someone looking at a picture of love but the last line proves otherwise. Nice usage. Lovely piece of work ne. |
| sylvia's syndrome 4/26/12 . chapter 11 This is excellent. Despite the potentially restricting format, you expressed yourself clearly and powerfully. The imagery is wonderful and the message is chilling. Congratulations on a job well done. Keep writing! |
| Dale Christopher 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Clear and powerful message written expertly. Good work. Peace, Daze |
