|Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love|
| reluctant writer 4/26/12 . chapter 13
Oh, I really liked these. I can really feel something from reading them.
| un-pre-dic-ta-ble 57 4/26/12 . chapter 12
I love this tanka it is so good so sad to. I loved it I want to cry now.
| dusk orchid 4/26/12 . chapter 12
Hauntingly tragic. I love the part about the "radiant smile will be stolen."
| myno 4/26/12 . chapter 12
this is lovely too, but i actually liked the haiku better.
| BlackDie53 4/26/12 . chapter 12
This is just beautiful.
| nanashi-04 4/26/12 . chapter 12
so sad that this always happens. excellent tanka.
| dollface and her cancer 4/26/12 . chapter 12
You've mastered the art of haiku. I'm jealous.
| citrus scented 4/26/12 . chapter 12
oh i can relate, you capture such sorrow.
| reluctant writer 4/26/12 . chapter 12
Sad, but beautiful.
| Jacqueline Stem 4/26/12 . chapter 12
Love it. Sorry, but I don't think theres much else to say but that.
| Katterree Fengari 4/26/12 . chapter 12
Oo, very interesting...well, that answers my question of what does the title mean I like "the last trace" part
| Ironic Presence 4/26/12 . chapter 12
wow. again, I feel exactly the same way about someone right now. good job.
| KitsuneXHana 4/26/12 . chapter 11
A sad one. Makes one think that you're just someone looking at a picture of love but the last line proves otherwise. Nice usage. Lovely piece of work ne.
| sylvia's syndrome 4/26/12 . chapter 11
This is excellent. Despite the potentially restricting format, you expressed yourself clearly and powerfully. The imagery is wonderful and the message is chilling. Congratulations on a job well done. Keep writing!
| Dale Christopher 4/26/12 . chapter 11
Clear and powerful message written expertly. Good work.