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| Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love |
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  Moon-Chaser 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Such a powerful message in so few words. Wonderfully done, you show so much in this. keep it up./ |
| Devil Dairies 4/26/12 . chapter 11 It's extream. It's powerful. |
| Niels Stegeman 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Very effective poem. I liked it. Thanks for the review! |
| pictographic.love 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Short, but not lacking in anything. Nice work. |
| blackoutroses 4/26/12 . chapter 11 loved it- i intially thought that this would be hard to portray such a message in a haiku, but you've written expertly. i like the part about not crossing the name out- it brings up great visual imagery. on my faves. |
| Infection 4/26/12 . chapter 11 this was an interesting collection of haiku. they were really good. |
| sarah1491 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Very emotional and powerful. |
| LittleWhiteWolf 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Short, but cuts brutally to the point, mirroring your theme. Good job! |
| likes to headbang 4/26/12 . chapter 11 omg.. both of these are really powerful... nice job ) |
| azn aquarian 4/26/12 . chapter 11 *stunned...*wow! nice stuff!it's really powerful, i love the way you've done the whole thing!kep writing ! |
| The dead boy's poet 4/26/12 . chapter 11 youve made the metaphor so real. comparing cutting physically with its literary sense something i usually don't encountered, as well as scars that reminds of memories. i like this one. |
| Jason J. Ross 4/26/12 . chapter 11 Have not seen your work published lately? How is everything? I hope all is well? Warm wishes. Jason. |
| Basnirka amaterka 4/26/12 . chapter 11 One of the three best emotional haikus I've seen on fp since months (Last Fall by Ygg and Mako's Eyes by Sleeping Pisces). In a way reminds me of my own haiku Addiction II which I wrote last week on the same topic (sic). I like some other of your poems so you're in the club of my FAVs. With respect, b a |
| citrus scented 4/26/12 . chapter 10 "smudges of love, rivers of you"...wow. thats very powerful. |
| catching-falling-stars 4/26/12 . chapter 10 i like the consistency with the ice and rivers. it reminds me of winter melting into spring. and spring is the season of love! stellar job! |
