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| Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love |
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  Jason J. Ross 4/26/12 . chapter 8 A good tanka. You express the emotion very well. I like how you channel the experience into art. |
| Needa S 4/26/12 . chapter 8 Touching, Nicely done. Keep up the great work. |
| Moondog Dozier 4/26/12 . chapter 8 Vivid, the reader can feel this. |
| sixPAC 4/26/12 . chapter 7 Powerful, descriptive. I love the depth of this haiku, exceptional. |
| The dead boy's poet 4/26/12 . chapter 7 its so obsessive. i like this one. heavy. |
| blackoutroses 4/26/12 . chapter 7 wonderful, haunting words. |
| catching-falling-stars 4/26/12 . chapter 7 i like it! it seems kind of magical in a sad sort of way. beautifully written and a great inspiration! |
| citrus scented 4/26/12 . chapter 7 oh morbid and compelling; this is heartwrneching. |
| Jason J. Ross 4/26/12 . chapter 7 This whole sequence is great. I admire those that utilize the healing properties of art. |
| notso darling 4/26/12 . chapter 7 At first i thought this poem was for Kristallnacht (the night of broken glass)but the twist in the last line made it all the more personal. Good work |
| betalight 4/26/12 . chapter 6 Wonderful. |
| Rose Dark Thorn 4/26/12 . chapter 6 The corrext structure for a tanka is 5-7-5-7-7, but despite that, I like this. It is beautifully done. For some reason, I think you would make beautiful lanturnes as well. |
| catseyeview 4/26/12 . chapter 6 just wow! you're a beautiful writer. I will be sure to return back to your latest poem. It's helped me spark the will to write again. I haven't really written much in a while. Thank you. |
| born-again 4/26/12 . chapter 6 Beautiful imagery with the roses, great poem. |
| sage-of-solitude 4/26/12 . chapter 6 I especially like the phrase "merciful clarity" and the imagery of burying a "wilted dream." Nice job and thanks for the reviews. |
