|Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love|
| Jason J. Ross 4/26/12 . chapter 8
A good tanka. You express the emotion very well. I like how you channel the experience into art.
| Needa S 4/26/12 . chapter 8
Touching, Nicely done. Keep up the great work.
| Moondog Dozier 4/26/12 . chapter 8
Vivid, the reader can feel this.
| sixPAC 4/26/12 . chapter 7
Powerful, descriptive. I love the depth of this haiku, exceptional.
| The dead boy's poet 4/26/12 . chapter 7
its so obsessive. i like this one.
| blackoutroses 4/26/12 . chapter 7
wonderful, haunting words.
| catching-falling-stars 4/26/12 . chapter 7
i like it! it seems kind of magical in a sad sort of way. beautifully written and a great inspiration!
| citrus scented 4/26/12 . chapter 7
oh morbid and compelling; this is heartwrneching.
| Jason J. Ross 4/26/12 . chapter 7
This whole sequence is great. I admire those that utilize the healing properties of art.
| notso darling 4/26/12 . chapter 7
At first i thought this poem was for Kristallnacht (the night of broken glass)but the twist in the last line made it all the more personal. Good work
| betalight 4/26/12 . chapter 6
| Rose Dark Thorn 4/26/12 . chapter 6
The corrext structure for a tanka is 5-7-5-7-7, but despite that, I like this. It is beautifully done. For some reason, I think you would make beautiful lanturnes as well.
| catseyeview 4/26/12 . chapter 6
just wow! you're a beautiful writer. I will be sure to return back to your latest poem. It's helped me spark the will to write again. I haven't really written much in a while. Thank you.
| born-again 4/26/12 . chapter 6
Beautiful imagery with the roses, great poem.
| sage-of-solitude 4/26/12 . chapter 6
I especially like the phrase "merciful clarity" and the imagery of burying a "wilted dream." Nice job and thanks for the reviews.