| Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love |
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AllyCred 4/26/12 . chapter 6 really loved this tankas are just really beautiful, i love them. this was great though had a lot of emotion and feeling pouring out. lots of love AllyCred |
Steel Winged Angel 4/26/12 . chapter 6 Wow...this is amazing! I love it! I got hooked on tankas for awhile on TPS and I had a blast with it. Your writing is beautiful. Very very very nicely done. HawkePS thanks for the reviews. |
godawful teen-angst poetry 4/26/12 . chapter 6 perfect perfect perfect |
poetic abortion 4/26/12 . chapter 6 I love this so much. This tanka stirred up so much emotion as I read. A brillant work and holds so much meaning. Well done ! * Noelle * |
Manuel Fajar 4/26/12 . chapter 6 Clear water—cools smooth, Poured libation—rose unfolds, Sparkling diadems,— But I noticed from one stem, Dropped one red tear,—naught was said. |
simpleplan13 4/26/12 . chapter 6 interesting description.. great poem.. tahnks for your review |
linaeve 4/26/12 . chapter 6 oh, what beautiful images. i enjoyed the parallelism there between the roses & the narrator's dream. |
white-clouds 4/26/12 . chapter 5 Strong emotions expressed in so little words. |
me10 4/26/12 . chapter 5 i really dont understand how you managed to combine so much in 13 words! its amazing! very talented. the words are perfect to describe it and short but simple. awesome work. |
Oath 4/26/12 . chapter 5 I am always speechless after reading such greatly written haiku's; now that is talent if you can fit that much meaning and emotion in a haiku. It doesn't feel forced but flows rather nicely... im in awe i admit, very breautiful and the title is more than appropriate. *Very* nicely done. fav |
poetic abortion 4/26/12 . chapter 5 Beautiful ! Stunning. So realistic. o Noelle |
godawful teen-angst poetry 4/26/12 . chapter 5 . terrific. I can relate totally and completely. Gorgeously written, a perpetual aching pushed quietly to the back of the mind. Great job. lyv |
My Mental Disaster 4/26/12 . chapter 5 Your haikus are brilliant, i cannot say how much i admire your well chosen and perhaps perfect words...I would gather a universe of meaning from this poem even if I did not already guess your inspiration. |
myno 4/26/12 . chapter 5 excellent imagery, and i'm very sorry if you are going through this, i can only imagine how hard it is. |
Anjeni Windsinger 4/26/12 . chapter 5 O.o Speechless. Eveything - just - wow. Unbelievably powerful. |