Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love
AllyCred 4/26/12 . chapter 6
really loved this tankas are just really beautiful, i love them. this was great though had a lot of emotion and feeling pouring out. lots of love AllyCred
Steel Winged Angel 4/26/12 . chapter 6
Wow...this is amazing! I love it! I got hooked on tankas for awhile on TPS and I had a blast with it. Your writing is beautiful. Very very very nicely done. HawkePS thanks for the reviews.
godawful teen-angst poetry 4/26/12 . chapter 6
perfect perfect perfect
poetic abortion 4/26/12 . chapter 6
I love this so much. This tanka stirred up so much emotion as I read. A brillant work and holds so much meaning. Well done !

* Noelle *
Manuel Fajar 4/26/12 . chapter 6
Clear water—cools smooth,

Poured libation—rose unfolds,

Sparkling diadems,—

But I noticed from one stem,

Dropped one red tear,—naught was said.
simpleplan13 4/26/12 . chapter 6
interesting description.. great poem.. tahnks for your review
linaeve 4/26/12 . chapter 6
oh, what beautiful images. i enjoyed the parallelism there between the roses & the narrator's dream.
white-clouds 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Strong emotions expressed in so little words.
me10 4/26/12 . chapter 5
i really dont understand how you managed to combine so much in 13 words! its amazing! very talented. the words are perfect to describe it and short but simple. awesome work.
Oath 4/26/12 . chapter 5
I am always speechless after reading such greatly written haiku's; now that is talent if you can fit that much meaning and emotion in a haiku. It doesn't feel forced but flows rather nicely... im in awe i admit, very breautiful and the title is more than appropriate. *Very* nicely done. fav
poetic abortion 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Beautiful ! Stunning. So realistic. o

Noelle
godawful teen-angst poetry 4/26/12 . chapter 5
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terrific.

I can relate totally and completely. Gorgeously written, a perpetual aching pushed quietly to the back of the mind. Great job.

lyv
My Mental Disaster 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Your haikus are brilliant, i cannot say how much i admire your well chosen and perhaps perfect words...I would gather a universe of meaning from this poem even if I did not already guess your inspiration.
myno 4/26/12 . chapter 5
excellent imagery, and i'm very sorry if you are going through this, i can only imagine how hard it is.
Anjeni Windsinger 4/26/12 . chapter 5
O.o Speechless. Eveything - just - wow. Unbelievably powerful.
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