|Reviews for Haiku collection: Unrequited love|
| AllyCred 4/26/12 . chapter 6
really loved this tankas are just really beautiful, i love them. this was great though had a lot of emotion and feeling pouring out. lots of love AllyCred
| Steel Winged Angel 4/26/12 . chapter 6
Wow...this is amazing! I love it! I got hooked on tankas for awhile on TPS and I had a blast with it. Your writing is beautiful. Very very very nicely done. HawkePS thanks for the reviews.
| godawful teen-angst poetry 4/26/12 . chapter 6
perfect perfect perfect
| poetic abortion 4/26/12 . chapter 6
I love this so much. This tanka stirred up so much emotion as I read. A brillant work and holds so much meaning. Well done !
* Noelle *
| Manuel Fajar 4/26/12 . chapter 6
Clear water—cools smooth,
Poured libation—rose unfolds,
But I noticed from one stem,
Dropped one red tear,—naught was said.
| simpleplan13 4/26/12 . chapter 6
interesting description.. great poem.. tahnks for your review
| linaeve 4/26/12 . chapter 6
oh, what beautiful images. i enjoyed the parallelism there between the roses & the narrator's dream.
| white-clouds 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Strong emotions expressed in so little words.
| me10 4/26/12 . chapter 5
i really dont understand how you managed to combine so much in 13 words! its amazing! very talented. the words are perfect to describe it and short but simple. awesome work.
| Oath 4/26/12 . chapter 5
I am always speechless after reading such greatly written haiku's; now that is talent if you can fit that much meaning and emotion in a haiku. It doesn't feel forced but flows rather nicely... im in awe i admit, very breautiful and the title is more than appropriate. *Very* nicely done. fav
| poetic abortion 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Beautiful ! Stunning. So realistic. o
| godawful teen-angst poetry 4/26/12 . chapter 5
I can relate totally and completely. Gorgeously written, a perpetual aching pushed quietly to the back of the mind. Great job.
| My Mental Disaster 4/26/12 . chapter 5
Your haikus are brilliant, i cannot say how much i admire your well chosen and perhaps perfect words...I would gather a universe of meaning from this poem even if I did not already guess your inspiration.
| myno 4/26/12 . chapter 5
excellent imagery, and i'm very sorry if you are going through this, i can only imagine how hard it is.
| Anjeni Windsinger 4/26/12 . chapter 5
O.o Speechless. Eveything - just - wow. Unbelievably powerful.