|Reviews for The World in Play: Chapter 3: Arrivals|
| FromTheAuthor 1/8/13 . chapter 1
Thank you for the input.
The first three chapters of the story arc are complex and written over several years in several versions. I'm still not completely satisfied with how I've handled the necessary back story, but I'm working on it. -LynnKH.
| Loraine Wentworth 1/6/13 . chapter 1
The scene-setting description is good here. I generally had a good sense of the setting/location/landscape, for example the Inn.
The dialogue is also pretty good most of the time-it seems to flow naturally. However sometimes I wasn't sure who was speaking, so that might need some clarification.
As with earlier chapters, I enjoyed the detailed nature of the world you present. It was nice to find out some more about Ann, too- I hadn't come across her full real name before. Once Ann started investigating things, I was really drawn into this chapter. The shape shifting vampire is unique and interesting, too.