What a tender dedication to your guy friends. So touching! I already have a cold, you don't need to make me feel all emotional along with it. But there you go again, warming my heart. You!

I enjoyed reading this thoroughly. Hope to see more from you soon. Oh no, the pressure in my head is off. Excuse me.

AP

Very interesting way of putting it. And I love the way you've written it too. A nice balance of flow and imagery. It's so hard to get it to sound flowery and still get the nuances in. Great job :)