Beautiful imagery tainted by a melancholy view. Keep writing.

Beautiful work :)

Wow, this is such a good poem, I love the line, "the thorns it shed, shall make you weep."
This is a beautiful poem, it is now one of my favorites!

Nice. It took me a few reads to fully get the message you were trying to convey. Good job on working the symbolism. I have to say this though I read your profile before I started reading the poem and you are wrong dear you write marvelously.

Lovely, I love how it rhymes :)

A sweetly bittersweet poem! I absolutely adored this! I do hope to see more of this from you! Well done!:D

I am truly amazed. Your writing skills are impressive and the subject matter surprisingly beautiful. Who says you suck at writing? Your awesome! You should definetly make a career out of this.

Pretty! It had a very shakespearean vibe to it- it's lovely, your writing style is simple but that's what gives your poem its unique feel -

I love this. it's absolutely beautiful.

As lovely and delicate as the rose itself, but also has the thorny strength of that flower. I'd like to find something like this growing in my garden.

Nicely phrased, and well done.

this is a really good poem. ur pretty good, and its true. nice :)

This was beautiful. Some of the lines were a little long, but it's still beautiful!

*sniff*

That was beautiful!

I adore the scale of this poem.

Sincerely, (oh, and yes this is an inside joke)

ILAUGHATYOUALL

Short but wonderfully done. I love your work.