Hmm this will not do at all... must...has...more...now...! Please i BEG YOU! Lolz no seriously. More. Now! ;P

Lolz i read the lyrics to the song and literally nerded all over the floor very messy by the way anyhow i absolutely love this song cuz like Ebony it reminds of myself ;P but um... i love it so far :) so ummm imma finish reading the rest of the chapters and stuff... soo ... umm yeah ;P

This is so interesting. Please Update soon, I love your story.

Ethan and ebony romance? yes please! I'm 24yrs old and I'm stil finding myself caught up in their developing relationship. so cute! though this briggs guy is just seriously insane in a way that makes you want to know more about him...wow, what a kook!

I just love how you wrote this! It immediately makes me want to click the Next button :))

That was interesting.

Oh, how I miss this story w

Brilliant as ever, this chapter is :3 I'm hungry since you mentioned pizza. Merp. I kind of got confused with Bri and Brandy since their names are similar but I probably won't have much problem with telling the difference between them because, they're, well, them. Glad you took my Snow White idea into consideration :3

till the next time

The story so far is quite intertaining. The development of the plat and charatres are really good. there are a few pints i wish to bring to your attention. First, the sister's nam and the blond friends name are close and sometimes confusing who you are talking about. Second, i would love to see more interactions between Ebony and Ethan. All in all, i love the story and cannot wait for more.

When did the brother leave on his trip to Tokyo? good job! i love grapefruit, strawberry smoothies.:-p

I just found this story and I love it! (: The storyline is really original and the characters are fab. Can't wait to keep reading! :3

Char x

Meh. I don't want to log in.

I honestly don't know what 'nostalgic' means. Go on, laugh all you want. Whatever it means, this chapter is it. I suppose. But anyhow, I'm glad you like the Snow White idea :3 I look forward to reading it

This story is hilariously ridiculous! In a good way, of course. I love the name Ebony! I've always thought of some snow-whire themed story thing and wanted to name the character Ebony but... oh well.

I just had a brilliant idea - you could make a bonus chapter where Ebony is Snow White and... well you can guess what goes on from there :3

Keep up the good work dearie!

OMG I love this can't wait to hear more from you!

The whole catchphrase thing made me crack up. Every time I read crusty buns I cracked up, and I was already laughing at 'livid tomatoes' especially! Anyway, can't wait to hear more. I'm excited! This is awesome!

Haha, cute! (In German, not supposed to be on this wibsitek, so I gotta make it brief!)

Update soon!

love this story the characters the deatail the stroy line and the title of the story!

man if i was a publisher this would have been on the shelfs a long time ago.

and i have a litle bit of luck here since someone is so amazing can you reveiw my story and possibly give some feed back for improvement or good thing in the story :)

Mate but this story has nothing wrong with and you shall cary on!