|Reviews for If time ran out of batteries|
| TheGlycoprotein 11/25/12 . chapter 1
The imagery you conjure here is absolutely amazing, and the variating vocabulary you use is enchanting - for example "Her cute little lips, so vulgar and uncouth", it adds a different element, a different depth to her character. My favourite part, however, has to be "it's just a phase, it's just a phase - they say,". That, for me, was the climax point of this poem, the repetition acting like a bullet to the head.
One word, my friend: Awesome.
You should be very, very proud of this :)
| AnonymousLily 5/21/12 . chapter 1
Interesting- "She writes hatred on her wrist" maybe links to suicide? "Her cute little lips so vulgar and uncouth" really stood out for that contrast. I did not expect those last 3 lines, but they grabbed me!
| weareyourworstnightmare 3/22/12 . chapter 1
wow, is really all I can say. You used a very unique way to sum up the emotion of pain. This was inded quite an enjoyable read!