Oh wow... That threw me off what I thought was happening! Instead of ending on a terrifying note it ended on an adorable one! Well done :D

OMG...that was...an emotional rollercoaster...
That was terrifying! Man that was scary! I thought for sure something horrible was going to happen...but as soon as she started pouting I was like "Wait, WHAT?" Gah, this story is incredible... even the description. One of the best descriptions I have ever read for a story. Amazing amazing job. Favoriting this and your other story because MAN THEY DESERVE IT.