This is the saddest poem I've ever read! When you said that line "So familiar to her now, so dear ,That it makes her want to cry." I started to tear up alittle at the cry part. The line before really defines that line as well. I'm just to lazy to qoute it;but I do love it. This poem really got to my emotions;which is what poems are supposed to do. I love when poems make you sad or cry because it means that they're unforgettable! I love every stanza every word and it's a greet poem. I think the one that got away is a song by Katty Perry?

Very good. Touching.

It was quite broken which in a normal poem wouldn't work but you managed to make it part of the poem. It was a great piece. Personally I quite liked the style, but that's just me. :-D