|Reviews for Despair|
| SilverIsamu 11/4/12 . chapter 1
Beautiful wording, I enjoyed reading this piece. Its such a deep and dark description of despair. I'm sure we all have experienced this before. Once again, great job! I hope to read more from you!
| AppleCrumble 10/13/12 . chapter 1
Brilliant! You've written another masterpiece for the Fictionpress archieve. Amazing!
| Ophelia Schmit 8/23/12 . chapter 1
All of a sudden, I'm finding poems about how I sometimes feel. Very relatable poems. :D
I liked how you had one word that rhymed with every other word in the whole story/poem (not sure what to call it XD).
P.S. Is the picture for this story supposed to be Ophelia from "Hamlet"? It looks like it. :P
| Valenteen 8/1/12 . chapter 1
Amazing- yet again you've done a fantastic job here.
| Spring Storm 7/5/12 . chapter 1
Dark and sad, but well written. I like it!
| rust phoenix 6/19/12 . chapter 1
I know this feeling. You've described it well. I really like the look of this poem, too. It's got an interesting shape on the page.
| LeoValdezgirl77 6/18/12 . chapter 1
you have a beautiful way with words. great work. I love it. totally going into my favorites..
| Punslinger 6/10/12 . chapter 1
Very good. This has a strong but delicate touch that makes us feel the despair without being drawn too deeply into it.
| Utada Rumiko 6/5/12 . chapter 1
Slightly disturbing (lol) but otherwise a beautiful poem. You're really talented. Honestly, great job.
| knownkonvict 5/29/12 . chapter 1
I love the alliteration, "desperate despair"
Something like, despairingly desperate, or I'm not sure. Its just giving me ideas. I liked it, good job.
| TheTickingNeverStops 5/26/12 . chapter 1
With words you have crafted a mind blowing perspective on this. Thank you for sharing it with the world.
| La'Dispute 4/4/12 . chapter 1
I realy like this poem, it has so much emotion and it's very relatable. I also like your vocabulary and word choice :)
| the blues 3/31/12 . chapter 1
Aw... I've been here before, but I've never known how to word it as well as you just did. That was perfect.