|Reviews for Shade, My Shadows|
| kaykay-writes 5/18/12 . chapter 1
extremely touching. I AM FOR REAL. Nearly brought tears to my eyes. ALWAYS beautifully written and well 'performed'. This is what family should be all about!
| John 8.36 5/14/12 . chapter 1
This is precious. If your folks haven't ever read this, you need to have them do so! Great job!
| Natari Mirumura 5/12/12 . chapter 1
Very nice. Only 3 mistakes, but this poem is good. The format is solid, so it pulled through all the way. Keep it up .
| Jay T. Wolf 4/19/12 . chapter 1
Cute. I love how, in the beginning, the shades and shadows make the work see like a sad one but later one finds out in that the shadows are actually something loved and good. Beautifully executed.
Jay T. Wolf
| Meadow Frost 3/26/12 . chapter 1
really good. I find a lot of poetry on here that people say that they hate there parents and stuff so this was rather refreshing to me. wonderfully done.
| H0ld1ngH0p3 3/26/12 . chapter 1
That's beautiful! I've read a lot of poems where the writers seem to be crucifying their parents; your poem is a nice change of pace.
| TheGlycoprotein 3/24/12 . chapter 1
Ooh, that took an odd little turn at the end - I expected the shadows to signify something much more malignant than your parents. I got to the end and saw it in a totally different light from how I initially read it. I like the word choice and the metaphor - as I say, very cleverly done to change it right at the end :)