|Reviews for The Sudden Visibility of Sound|
| Anon 5/16/13 . chapter 11
Oh god, oh god, this is stunning and amazing and I've been left feeling bereft. You paint such wonderful characters and I'm feeling for all of them, but Caid, baby, I just want to steal you away and cuddle you better. And Josh. Just. And, oh god, Tally :S I don't even know what I want the outcome to be, but this is glorious and wonderfully painful in every way. Everyone is so vivid and realised and I'm meeting a friend later who is going to be on the receiving end of me trying to tearfully describe why this is so amazing. Your writing is stunning and I just - I read things you write and they stay with me. It feels like - to use a cliche - someone has punched a hole clear through my chest, and I'm just in awe of your skill.
I also kind of feel like reading it up until this point was a good experience as well. It almost feels like a terribly bitter and ambiguous ending - which has left me weeping onto my laptop. God, this is just amazing.
Also, damn. I listened to "Don't Go Slow" and it was PERFECTLY fitting and YOU ARE AMAZING.
| Reena 5/9/13 . chapter 11
Chapter 11 was WOW...hope u update soon I'm just so full of anxiety right now jus from thinking about what's going to happen next...Well i feel bad for all three of them:(..and out all the pages you mentioned in chapter 10 I was wondering which one will his life turn into and I seriously disagree with Caid that it will be pg 50*_*right?
| Guest 5/1/13 . chapter 11
Pleeeeeease write more. I check back so often you have no idea.
| CakesAMonster 4/29/13 . chapter 11
I don't even know what to type! Being reduced to a blubbering mess isn't my favorite past time but I just want to throw a blanket of happy over this couple *sob*
Keep being a beautiful human being and continue writing this wonderful story; it's like a drug.
| Sannah 4/27/13 . chapter 11
okay, this is such an intense little story, and it needs to get finished! gah!
| Vonnie 4/25/13 . chapter 11
I love this story. I come back to it all the time hoping for an update. My heart aches every time I get to the end of this chapter!
| Aria 4/18/13 . chapter 11
... You have got to be kidding me.
You leave off here!?
I'm so fucking emotional right now because it hurts because his sister.
Agh. My stomach is in knots. I'm gonna go and talk to my friend about the whole freaking moral dilemma thing...
| rAiNwAtEr1 4/5/13 . chapter 11
This story has completely blown me away. I am stunned by its pure beauty, and desperately hope you update soon!
| Azrael Adamine Gaunt 3/26/13 . chapter 11
| BlaseBlanco 3/19/13 . chapter 11
I love this story and how aware Caid is of the way he's acting along with his inability to stop himself. He seems so real and you do such an amazing job of telling a story through the view of a blind character. I don't even notice the lack of visual description and storytelling.
| GrangerDanger333 2/11/13 . chapter 11
Ah god my feels!
Such a brilliant story, I'm really hoping that you'll update again at some point!
Usually I would write off this story as too sad to read and boy oh boy, that last chapter was killing my insides. But still. I read it. And it was SO WORTH IT! heh :'( Super duper stuff here, can't wait to see what happens when Tally returns...
| PuzzledApproach 2/9/13 . chapter 11
are you planning on finishing this? I just found it and think it is absolutely incredible! I hope you update it soon :D
| Starlite Nightfall 2/3/13 . chapter 11
This story is so perfect and wonderful and I adore the characters and the pacing and your writing style and the smut my God the smut. Fucking perfect I was like "Oh my" and I had to reread some parts because I was just so taken aback by the sexiness of this story that my mind just would not process the magnificent things occurring! I can't wait for more! Fuuu what's going to happen to theeem? is Josh gonna give in? Is Caid gonna give up? I am freaking ouut! Almost 5 months have gone by! This story is so wonderful, need more! Adding this story to my favorites because no matter how it ends it's fucking amazing enough already! Update soon! :D
| Lulu the Llama 1/19/13 . chapter 11
I don't read a whole lot on this site but one of my readers suggested your work and I... I... both hate it and love it.
I mean I hate this one because it's so painful to read. But I love it because I was submerged and taken over and entranced and... GOBSMACKED. How do you do it? Write such lovable characters doing such painful things and making me want to throttle you and hug you at the same time?
This is getting put on a whole nother level so I'm gonna revert back to sanity for both our sakes.
Honestly I expected this to be light hearted despite the summary basically telling me life was crap for Caid. But I was like... author seems like a lively lovely lass and, while I am sure you are, my heart is like, in total shambles.
Caid and Josh are so sad. Now this story also made me go life philosophy on my friends. Normally I would like HATE the two who hurt the unsuspecting party (Tally). But you made us fall for Caid and Josh so expertly. It's a wonder really.
But honest, poor Tally. When she gets back... when she finds out... because she will find out, won't she? I mean she maybe might not but I have this sick sinking feeling. And you didn't even make her unlikable. Like I LIKE TALLY. Why couldn't she be this total abusive bitch or something... but then this wouldn't be so harsh. BECAUSE YOU KNOW IT'S HARSH RIGHT. And it's genius.
This story is so real and it just smacks you in the nitty bits. I think once the wound heals I'm going to go back and reread because you're... you're a writer to learn from. But right now the thought of going back honestly makes me want to curl up and cry. Actually I'm both dreading and excited for the next chapter. I need to know where this goes even if it kills me.
Thank you for writing something so... SO THIS.
| Conspicuous Maliciousness 1/19/13 . chapter 11
This is so.
Unacceptable. To leave off at a place like this? Unacceptable.
More chapters, PLEASE.