Wow! Another great chapter! Will you please update soon!

Good too, like I said, I like the hints you drop! I only have the same comments as before, but generally good! :)

It's rather good so far, I like the hints you drop and the emotion you portray. But if you don't mind a few comments, I noticed some mistakes with you're and your. :O Also, this might be just your own style of writing, but the narration seems a little curt and choppy-to me, that is. But all in all, I quite enjoyed it. :)

That was really nice how Diabolus stayed up all night worrying about Storm

Wow! It's short but yet its great!

Oh, this sounds interesting! Waiting for more! :)