|Reviews for The Red Envelope|
| AlpacaOverlord 7/29/12 . chapter 2
This is a really interesting world these characters live in. I'm looking forward to seeing more from this. Please keep writing!
| ReisTheImpregnable 3/27/12 . chapter 1
you've got a good start here. the story line is definitly interesting!
some helpful advice, watch your tenses, make sure everything is parrallel. i noticed a few comma errors and a couple other grammar-related things, but nobody's perfect, and i encourage you to improve. i see potential here(: