|Reviews for Lovelorn|
| Shaz.x.Bot 4/26/12 . chapter 1
Wao This is great for your first story! It's short but sweet so far. I'm looking forward to what you might do. Continue please, with some hard work this could be really cool *salutes*
Ah, your descriptions are really great. She sounds interesting as a character too. But I was confused as to how she knew their names? Do they go to her school? Other than that I think it was a very awesome chapter for your first story.
Hahaha, your authors notes were interesting. People think of the most greatest things in the most weirdest places! It's normal, ahaha.
God, im rambling. Anywho, I'm looking forward to what you can come up with.
| inhale-love 3/28/12 . chapter 1
Hey there, I just stumbled upon your story while scrolling through the newly made and updated stories in FP and your summary reeled me in, lol. Usually, the main character is torn between two guys, but in this case, it's three! Jeez, your main character is in for a lot of DRAMA..
Just one thing though, I kinda hoped that the ending of your first chappie would have some kind of 'oomph' factor, if you know what I mean. Like maybe the way she met her three 'dream guys' would have some kind of dramatic effect.
That's just my opinion, though. Either than that, the idea and plot seems great! Update soon!
xx, inhale-love :)
| True Talker 3/28/12 . chapter 1
I was into reading this story. Yes, I actually was. By the way I had really liked your autor's statment at the end that had made me laugh. I find your honesty to be funny. Thanks. I had also liked the comment where you had said if you get down to here then... Thanks for that also. Well, I guess people do appreciate their readers that is just written differently.