Hmm... This seems to have a lot of truth in it. Great work!

Enjoyed this...I can tell you have a melody going with it, that's for sure! I can totally see this as a great song.

that was cool! does it have a tune?

An interesting idea... "just goes and does his work" ... not sure if i'd describe him as a non-conformist! sorry i know i took that a bit out of context ;) i sorta like the idea of someone who doesnt moan and just helps people and stuff, but all the same i dont exactly think this is your best work..

Awesome concept, "for non-conformity society whips you with its displeasure" RW Emerson

that is really, really, REALLY good! i love it!