Love it, love it. Last sentence is awesome and really captivating in that rough sense of appeal way. xD will be waiting for more anxiously. :)))

Woah! I just started reading it and its pretty good! Can't wait to see whats next!

Lovely story, I'm really curious about what will happen next! I'll be waiting for new chapters!

Oh wow! I admire Samar's strong personality! I mean despite it all she's still trying to escape :) she's not just some stubborn girl, she thinks logically before acting, just like Dahlia :)
And ohmygoshohmygoshohmygosh! GREAT cliffie! Amazing way to end the chapter! :D
Keep up your amazing work :D

ah ! why did you stop there ? i can't wait to see what happens next :)

Different. Easy to follow. Interesting.

I had to wait a little bit too long for my taste to read this chapter, but it was worth it. Please dont let me waiting for the next one, the names and details are not so easy to remember if the reader have to wait too long to read, causing a bit of confusion when trying to remember who is who.

oh so Adnan is a prince..i hope things will get better between them.i'm excited for the next chapter :)

Hey, gotta say I like this story much better than Metal Mouths. I suppose it's because the action occurs more early on, and also because of Samar. She's a really nice narrator, not annoying or too stubborn. I feel like she should cut Adnan some more slack, he did save her after all. And it wouldn't quite make sense that she'd think he'd kill her family since they used to be friends, I feel like Samar is smarter than that.

what will happen to samar ? :o oh and samar means 'blur' in my native language :)

Oh Samar is going through a hard time accepting what's happening... I feel sorry for her and it seems like Rasheed is going to have to work really hard to win her forgiveness :/

Great update! I loved the new chapter :)

I just realized I have gotten to the end of your story, and don't know whether to be upset that there is no more to read or excited that there is still more to come. Update soon.

I hope you update soon!

Oh wow! I didn't see that coming but i love it :-) i never considered Rasheed as the bad guy and i'm glad it turned out he's not :-D

Great chapter! :-D

Ahh woah. Really great plot twist, but also very confusing. Like how did Rasheed pose as the general, and how did a former Queen so easily hide in a village? Update soon please!