"Merlinssake"? Merlin? Haha, I can roll with that. I really really LOVE the flow of this piece, by the way. It reads nicely, fluidly.

This is written quite well and this is incredibly sweet thank you so very truly much for sharing this and I had enjoyed the meaning behind this.

Very nice. I could sense the almost overpowering emotion in this. It sparked something along the line, that's for sure. Well done.

Is this poem a continuance of the guy in the poem 'Them' ? If so it is interesting how view point changes with time and how the same person who from afar appeared cool and detached now appears warm it's an intriguing progression. Hope to read more of your poems soon :)