You should totally do a sequel girly!

I just finished reading the Epilouge, ad you can probably tell by which chapter I'm reviewing... Anyway, You're a great writer. I rarely find mistakes, you update quickly, and your plot and characters were pretty good. I'll be looking for more of your stories.

Well I must say it was a nice story. I was expecting some complications because Maddie herself admited to having killed her mother, but I guess it was written as self-defense.

Other than the scene I already referred I believe the story was straight to the point. No desnecessary details. And I don't think I found a plot hole or a flaw. So I must say congratulations on finishing the story. In my opinion this story doesn't need a sequel, it's a pretty consistent stand alone story and i don't think its necessary to continue this story. However if you want to continue with the characters I think a paralel story or a side story is better.

I hope you continue to write what you want!

wow! Having fun uploading chapters? :)

Well it seems I was right, I guess I should trust my instincts more. They know better than me.

Nice development although I believe the Vincent and Maddie scene felt a bit unnatural, not because of the way it was written, but because of the place..Feels like the need to input some romance before things turn for worse, in order to give the main character the moral support or something. Not desnecessary but a little out of place.. I hope you understand what I mean because I'm getting a bit confused myself :)

Well I guess I have to stick around in order to see whats going to happen. Because those life/death situations are very dependent on the author and its way of thinking and imagination so I won't know either they live or die until I read it..

Idk I am a weird person. I can shake my eyes.. Twist my arm all around.. And I can do a scorpion in a weird way..

Woah.. What a whack job!

Goo MAddi! Kml92 are u a boy Or a girl?

Pooh! Cliffhanger!

Pooh! Cliffhanger!

Getting her face eaten off doesn't sound very fun at all. And, just out of curiosity, how does Sonya know who is and isn't a werewolf? If I look it up in the phone book am I going to find "Werewolf Killers R US" or something?

Gotta love Sean. He reads and email with the initianls S.H. and then finds a piece of paper with the name Sonya Harwick, S.H. and doesn't connect the dots. -sigh- He's cute thought so it's okay.

And she didn't question the fact that he just whipped out all that cash?

Lol. Stripped naked and danced on a pole? You and your freaky mind sister...

does that mean I got it right? Argh, you just left me in the middle of a cliffhanger ! (altough I personally love them, it makes the story more interesting)

hmm, don't know why but I got the feeling that they're her parents.. Just don't say anything yet, I wanna find out for myself :)

I guess this just proves my theory that Women are scarier than Men when they are serious :0