Gotta love how she has to pee in the yard. And Sean...just wow. I will forever associate him with kit kats and whipped cream now, thanks a lot.

And he doesn't even know how possible it is for her to eat him. I imagine it sucks for her being trapped in his house with a guy who thinks she's a dog.

When Sean said 'Why didn't you break me off a piece of that action?' All I heard was 'break me off a peiece of that kit kat bar!' Lol.

Uh oh, this is not going to end well. And let me just say, Isabelle is a nutcase. I approve, I think she gets to join the ranks of Feliciana, Wynter, Greta, and Mikka. Wow, love how three of those crazies are in the same book togehter...

Nice update. Nothing much to critique except a few typos here and there, ("you're" and then "your" right after that at one point) but nothing really distracting. I'm glad Noah and Maddi have sorta kinda met now and I'm looking forward to the inevitable explanations. I always like those moments in "supernatural/human" pairing stories. I like Noah's character and Maddi's cynicism is darkly humorous, despite the real drama. I just like that she's so, "ugh, screw you, life". lol

I'll be keeping an eye out!

Hm, harsh.

I feel sorry for the girl. :( I hope she'll be ok.

From the Review Game's Review Marathon (link in my profile)

IT'S JUST A HINCH THOUGH. - Typo: "Hunch"?

I liked this prologue, though it did remind me of the werewolves from Twilight just because the dialogue was in all capital letters and felt like it was yelling loudly-which is what they do in the movies for that franchise. But I do like that you created the rule that they can talk telepathically to any werewolf and not just the pack, that made things a lot more unique for me. I also liked your character Madeline because I thought she came across quite human and sympathetic, I felt bad for her by the end. I hope that she isn't dead! I also liked the characterization of the six-wolf pack because I think you did a good job describing them.

Interesting start. A little over the top with the crude dialogue, but I guess that's to be expected of a prologue to set the mood. I like Madeline so far. She has a confident and sharp tongued, yet vulnerable and "human" personality. Looking forward to her meeting the boy and where it takes them.

Good job!