Aww, Fee doesn't seem so bad now that I know 'more' about her. I can't wait for the story in her perspective. Greta was all pissed... I mean she always is... but still, this time she had a reason too, lol. .

Sigh... I'm always late with my comments.

Anyway.

First of all, I just noticed a small irony: the Jacob guy in your story. He's uncomfortable working alongside werewolves, but the Jacob in the Twilight Saga IS a werewolf. I don't know if you intended that or not, but I just had to say it.

Second: YAY! Christopher told Kalene! LOL, I was starting to think he would keep it to himself forever.

Last: Feliciana. She's a hell of a lot more mature now, although still a little childish (darling? *grin*). I started out feeling pretty neutral about her during Caleb and Lilith's story, then sort of disliked her when I read the first few chapters of Instincts. Now I feel sort of sorry for her.

Oh, one question. Did you already finish this story or are you still writing it? 'Cause I'm terribly baffled and not a little envious on how fast you update. LOL.

Great chapther :) And the source of my current procrastination on homework, but that's beside the point... I like how Christopher handled the whole Kalene passing out thing and it was great to see more into Fee's story. I think Kalene is my favorite, but Fee's story should be beyond interesting to read. Can't wait ;)

Aww. Poor Fee. At least she's got Trace later on. xD

I am excited for her story, actually. I've got to say I've always liked a fiery character. It's hard to write one in first person because I'm not that way, though. It's still fun to read. I also like to write about people like that.

When they were picking on her I thought it was funny. She deserves it. I feel sorry for Caleb, however. Being turned by Greta, but he feels he can't make fun of her with the group. Lol.

-Ink

You are a cruel person.

I can't believe you left that! *glares accusingly at computer screen*

What's got Greta's panties in a twist?

She did.. I am soo happy for her! It went so smooth. No yelling, conflicted emotions, or physical assaults. AWESOME!

I loved this chapter, as always. :) Greta is such a baby. God. She needs to grow up.

On the bright side, at least Kalene likes the idea of being Chris's soulmate. I'm happy for them. :P

Trace is a good name. I like that name. I'm sure he is. :P Is he headed like Fee?

I'm kinda glad that Kalene has trouble with her own feelings. It makes it sound more real, I guess?

-Ink

I would just like to point out that childish is a good thing. I would have done it simply becasue I hate Greta.

Great chapter and this Essence Shifting reminds me of Astral Projection :)

Hey! Sorry I didn't get to review the last chapter, I was in Vegas playing the games in the arcades. LOL. But anywho, I like this chapter. And wow, Christopher just dropped the bomb on Kalene. If someone were to do that to me, I would freak out a LOT.

Nothing like getting right to the point. I cannot believe you didn't use my idea! They were all supposoed to admit they don't like or trust Greta! That blows and I am so upset with you little sister!

Yay! He told her! And I hope they don't get caught essence shifting. cuz that would suck big time. And I rather like that she dispatched Steven with no thought. I hope they figure a way to enlarge their numbers cuz there's gonna be some hurtin going down. And is there a way for Christopher to poof his whole self the way she does?

I can definitely give Mikka some props. I mean, the whole sneaking into their house and killing people without looking back gives her a kind of bad-girl charm (if that makes sense?) despite its creepiness. She really is the perfect villian. The way Christopher was trying so hard to tell Kalene and then just went and said it was adorable :) He's such an awesome guy. All "oh, I can handle that" one second but then all nervous the next.

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At least its one of my latest names. xD

Aha! And he outright tells her. Good boy. Good boy. He already cares for Kalene, and they only met a couple weeks ago.

How will Kalene react? Question of the day! Hehe.

I'm excited to meet the infamous Kyle. :) I'm excited.

-Ink