Well...that was a cliffhanger if I've ever seen one :P But it was good. You did the whole confused fight thing well whereas most people would have probably muddled it up. Did Christopher leave his shield down accidently and let people in? I can't wait for the rest :)

well i definataly wasnt expecting that and my heart droped when miranda had a stake in her stomach i hope he turns her i really do

This series is way past awesome I hope fee finds her soul mate...

*dances around frantically* Why do I get the feeling that the guy who killed the deer for Kalene is Fee's partner? Jeez. I'm going crazy with that bit. / _ /

I noticed a slight...I don't know if it's a mistake, but there's an inconsistency right around the part that Caleb asks if they're ready to go home.

Aww, this was a cute chapter(:

WHADDYA MEAN 'YET'? ARE YOU JUST MESSIN WITH ME OR ARE YOU DEAD SERIOUS?

I say mystery man is Christopher's evil twin brother who's working for Mikka and is screwing with his brother's life for the fun of it.

I liked this Chapter. It shows how strong the vampires are, even if it does remind me of the scene in twilight where they're practicing for the new born battle.

Chris made me laugh in this chapter. "Would you believe that its our love manifesting?" "No? I thought not..." XD Kalene and Chris are such a cute couple. I love them. My favorite couple, besides Richard and Miranda, even though they're not seen much.

Greta doesn't have any friends. Wow. She's disliked by everyone, lol.

-Ink

They are soooo corny! It's ridiculous! I would have been much more upset about themystery man screwing with me like that. Especially with this impending war coming up. It would be a lot more unnerving.

I love this story and is the guy that killed the doe for Kalene Trace? And did you change his name? Didn't it start with a K like Kyle or something like that?

The three of them moved away from the house and soon Kalene and Christopher fell in step behind Feliciana, letting her lead the way. "So, I won your sister's stamp of approval then?" he asked, twining his fingers with hers.

"Evidently," Kalene nodded, stretching up on her toes to brush a kiss across his jaw.

"I'm glad," Christopher said, bringing her hand to his lips.

Yeah, I'm glad too.

He shot her a startled look and pulled away from her finger. "What are you doing?" he asked skeptically.

"Isn't it obvious?" Fee asked with a laugh. "I'm wiping up that drool I mentioned," She sent him a wink and laughed again. "Come on, let's haul our asses on over there and whip up some magic,"

Christopher thought, for one horrified minute, that she was going to slap his ass like a football player, but she only gave him another wink and skipped over to the crowd of vampires watching them. He blew out a sigh of relief and followed. Whoever ended up with Feliciana sure had better know how to handle her personality. A weak man would not do, that was for sure.

Well I'm interested to see who Fee's soul mate is so keep on going!

Great story so far!

There were a few things like tenses and stuf that were a bit messsed up, but it really doesn't take away from the story much.

Sorry about all this criticism BTW... I feel like I'm someone who is like this who I won't mention the name of because that wouldn't be nice...

How do you get the chapters out so fast?

Tarah xXx

Good chapter! ) I found your update right before I was going to start my homework haha ) ahh procrastination at its finest haha ) That's pretty legit ) (using latin for Christopher) and it makes sense ) I have to say I'm not a fan of latin though haha we had to take it in 6th grade and that's the year I came and my classmates had started taking it in 4th so I was lost haha. Psh of course it makes of loveable! Everybody knows dorks are the best haha ;) I'm excited to see what comes next! )

chocoyum4

great chapter and i'm a little less loopey right now so yeahh i have on question thou is richard going to turn miranda and what would her power be and also mikka is my favorite villan much crazier than steven and the last this i have to say is i will read ur triology because u r my favorite author and i hope u get published

wow i am totallt addicted to this series it made me feel so much better after my surgery and i have to say my favorite character is fee just because of her bitchyness and i do believe she has grown as a person and that she deserves her own soulmate anyway i think u r ectreamly talented and i cnt wait to see what happens next sry i if thhe apellling is a bit off i'm kinda druggedd up on pain killers

enter mikka. She's going to steal Kalene or something tragic like that. The perfect lure to get Christopher to come running.