| Reviews for The Unforgettable Notion of Love |
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Megsi 4/2/12 . chapter 2I like this, it's well written and seems to have a good storyline so far but I'm a little confused about the whole memory deal. Like how she could just forget everyone. I feel like seven years isn't that long of a time, especially to forget someone she spent so much time with. Also, you mentioned that she knew the girls from 8 years ago, so it seems like she knew them for less time then Gavin and yet she remembered them and not him. Maybe that was a typo or maybe you'll explain it later on (like she's suppressed her memories), but it does seem a tad unrealistic right now. |
Lucifers angel 666 3/31/12 . chapter 1 Does she have amnesia? |
HungerInHerEyes 3/31/12 . chapter 1Great first chapter, can't wait to read the rest :) |