WOW!

It's pretty nice. I love it when you compare Love with Magic. I should agree with you regarding the trust between people. The one I only believe is love from my parents, brother, and my closest family, and my love for them. Anything than that is biased by the falsehood and mask. Pretty decent, I do love your essay. Quality above quantity, I believe.

Very brief. I think this speaks to your life experience; would I be incorrect if I said you're a teenager? I disagree with the essay. I think love exists.

Rather than write a response essay, though, in favor of my argument, I'll instead quote a sentence of yours.

"We can't read minds so there will never be any real trust between people."

I promise you, trust can exist despite mind-reading, and I think you could write a better essay than this one if you try to flesh out your understanding of trust, and why you believe telepathy is necessary for it.

So true.